Belated Happy Birthday fic to lifeasanamazon

[krazykitkat]

Sorry it's late, Hon. Half of it was written before your birthday, and then the rest was stubborn (and also took a right turn at Albuquerque).

And forgot to add thanks to athena4lynn for looking it over.



Tease
by Kat

She closes her eyes as his words wash over her.

He kicks the end of the bed. She insists she's listening and repeats his last sentence. She doesn't tell him he was composing that section aloud in his sleep last night.

He doesn't resume his oratory, and she's about to investigate whether he's disappeared, when the mattress sags. His hands push up under her tshirt, fingertips cataloguing her ribs. He tells her to keep her eyes closed as he circles her breasts.

She knows him well enough to know he'll probably stop if she doesn't obey. And while this thing between them is, more often than not, a battle of wills, the anticipation gathering force between her thighs is louder than any objections.

She lifts her hips as he pulls down her panties, and squirms at the brush of his beard across her stomach. He spreads her legs, and she’s getting wetter with each heartbeat.

"Back in a second," he mumbles, pushing off the bed, and she thinks he must’ve forgotten the condoms. But the second evolves into a minute and her nipples are more cold than aroused.

She calls his name, receiving a noncommittal grunt, followed by the rustling of paper, in reply.

She knows what he's doing before she opens her eyes. She grabs her tshirt, rolls it into a ball, and launches it at him. The missile falls short, but does make him look up.

He waves his pen in the air and then taps it against the pad. "The closing--" And the words recapture his attention.

Resigning herself to second place, she says, "Read it to me."

She closes her eyes as she presses her finger against her clit.

Comments

[lifeasanamazon.livejournal.com]

Ooooooooooooooooooooooh! That's fucking brilliant, Hon! Utterly brilliant. He's a bastard, but he's her bastard.
So many good lines and a killer ending that I completely wasn't expecting.
Thank you a million times over!

*love*

[krazykitkat.livejournal.com]

I'm so pleased (and relieved).

Well that's two of us who weren't expecting the ending ;) I wrote the first 4 paragraphs and then just ground to a halt. Smut was the obvious, but the muse is such a bastard these days and I just had no idea how to end it. And then this alternate popped up ;)

[melwil.livejournal.com]

Wow!

That was awesome Kat

[krazykitkat.livejournal.com]

Thank you, Hon :)

Was a bloody hard slog though.

[athena4lynn.livejournal.com]

YAY!! I told you this already, but this ROCKs. It's beautiful written, and so, so them. I can picture this so vividly in my mind, and the cruel streak in me makes me chuckle. LOL.

Love it. It's beautiful!

[krazykitkat.livejournal.com]

My cruel streak loves your cruel streak ;)

[christinekh.livejournal.com]

Wheeeee! This was SO good, kat! People should have birthdays more often so you'll write more often.

::loves::

[krazykitkat.livejournal.com]

Hehehe! 2 weeks for 300 words...no one's allowed any more birthday ever!

Thank you :)

[littleloonlost.livejournal.com]

I can't begin to tell you how exactly, perfectly, wonderfully this was what I needed. Really. I can't. So you'll have to settle for a delighted yelp and a massive thank you for posting this just now. Delicious, completely.

[krazykitkat.livejournal.com]

Oh, thank you, my love! And sometimes my timing is impeccable ;)

[gingasaur.livejournal.com]

Oh. Man. I can't even think of what to say except I freaking love this. I just... guh. GUH.

[krazykitkat.livejournal.com]

Thank you very much :)

[orangespaces.livejournal.com]

AMAZING! UTTERLY FANTASTIC!

[krazykitkat.livejournal.com]

Thank you for reading and letting me know :)

[sinkwriter.livejournal.com]

So... I was cleaning out my personal email inbox, and unearthed a delightful email from Angie, in which she provided the link to this story she wanted to share with me. I finally, finally got around to reading it, shame on me.

You have such a way with these characters, Kat. I adore your writings. And this one surprised me, because what I thought might be causing his delay ended up completely off-base -- the direction taken instead was unexpected and delightfully funny (especially when she already knows what's going on and launches a t-shirt at him in response, LOL). Love it.

:D

Greatest of apologies for the hugely belated feedback. Hee.

Happy New Year!
Sinkwriter

aka Sherry (or curviegirl) on TobysTarts and CJToby and several other WW sites on yahoo

[krazykitkat.livejournal.com]

I thought the name rang some little bells in the back corner of my brain :) Hello and welcome, Sherry!

Thank you so much. That's the only thing I've completed and posted in the last year. And it was like pulling teeth. The direction taken was unexpected to me too ;) It was meant to be smut, but muse wasn't talking to me and I was trying so hard to have it done for Angie. Don't know where the end came from, but i was just happy for it to be there!

You made my day.