Thank you :) And I'm glad they made you curious. I guess that means they work!
It's funny, I don't particularly like that last one. Partly because it's one of the very rare times I used first person, and I'm not a fan. And it doesn't "feel" like me, much more description and physicality than my normal, and it just feels awkward to me. Maybe it's because I'm not comfortable writing like that, so it seems off to me. Not sure if any of that makes sense...
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Date: 2008-09-11 03:15 pm (UTC)It's funny, I don't particularly like that last one. Partly because it's one of the very rare times I used first person, and I'm not a fan. And it doesn't "feel" like me, much more description and physicality than my normal, and it just feels awkward to me. Maybe it's because I'm not comfortable writing like that, so it seems off to me. Not sure if any of that makes sense...