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You write so beautifully, so visually and sensually. Evocative description and action so fluid. The hairs prickle on the back of my neck, my stomach twists.
Mine is endless dialogue and jerky basic movement. No depth of emotion, nothing visual or touching. The length of the monster has made it clearer. I can't post it, at best everyone will hate it, at worst it will be labelled badfic! cliche and people will laugh and point at it and I'll be so ashamed and embarassed.
You're rich, moist chocolate cake with thick perfect icing. I'm Laura Brown's cake and it's never going to be good enough.

(no subject)

You write so beautifully, so visually and sensually. Evocative description and action so fluid. The hairs prickle on the back of my neck, my stomach twists.
Mine is endless dialogue and jerky basic movement. No depth of emotion, nothing visual or touching. The length of the monster has made it clearer. I can't post it, at best everyone will hate it, at worst it will be labelled badfic! cliche and people will laugh and point at it and I'll be so ashamed and embarassed.
You're rich, moist chocolate cake with thick perfect icing. I'm Laura Brown's cake and it's never going to be good enough.