the exposition was making me squirm the most. A lot of repetition, like you said. I'll go through the parts again over christmas :D to look for stuff specific.
But I LOVE the story itself. Your interaction between Josh and Toby is still dead on no matter what season!
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Date: 2004-12-23 03:03 am (UTC)But I LOVE the story itself. Your interaction between Josh and Toby is still dead on no matter what season!