I can understand why you were hesitant to post this oh so long ago, and somewhere along the line I think you said you were getting positive feedback on the CJDanny list for it while you still think it's crap.
I wouldn't so much say it's crap... 'cause it's not. :D It smells a whole lot prettier than the real crap I've seen on the WW lists of late. :D
But yeah, I did a bit of squirming while reading the bits you've posted so far. Nothing that couldn't be fixed with a good beta and whatnot. :D
I love the idea of this taking place after Danny turned down the editor job and that they've been a couple (with Carol's help) for 7 months prior to this. For the timing, Josh being overprotective is well in character. Toby (to me) not so much. Had this taken place first season WW, then, yeah, maybe.
Leo is also, I think, on target given the time frame. We're talking, what, late season 2 maybe early season 3, so yeah I can see this.
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I can understand why you were hesitant to post this oh so long ago, and somewhere along the line I think you said you were getting positive feedback on the CJDanny list for it while you still think it's crap.
I wouldn't so much say it's crap... 'cause it's not. :D It smells a whole lot prettier than the real crap I've seen on the WW lists of late. :D
But yeah, I did a bit of squirming while reading the bits you've posted so far. Nothing that couldn't be fixed with a good beta and whatnot. :D
I love the idea of this taking place after Danny turned down the editor job and that they've been a couple (with Carol's help) for 7 months prior to this. For the timing, Josh being overprotective is well in character. Toby (to me) not so much. Had this taken place first season WW, then, yeah, maybe.
Leo is also, I think, on target given the time frame. We're talking, what, late season 2 maybe early season 3, so yeah I can see this.
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